Re: The Woman

Sonya Lano | 14/07/2011

I found the story intriguing as in it would be interesting to see where she goes now, but I wish you would have said more about why she was running (a few more hints :o), and I think it would have been neat to have the dwarf and the other man be from the world where she's from and they were sent to take her back, or somehow involve them in the story instead of leaving them as a periphery scene.

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