Re: Leopard-Skin Pill-Box Hat - Feedback

Damien | 21/07/2011

Likes: I like the way you approach the bond between father and son, and demonstrate that even though the father may be a flawed character in some ways, he is still essentially a good guy. Using music to demonstrate that is a nice touch.

Dislikes: I think you overdo the musical references a little. It comes across as a bit band-geeky as a result. Especially going into details of albim covers and so on.

The main character is a hoarder. So he collects anything and everything. Which means he would not neccessarily be such a geek with music. He is more of an all-round geek, and this is where I think the story drops away in credibility a little

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