Re: Last Minute Nerves

Sonya Lano | 15/08/2011

I thought the story was well thought out and well written with a good lead-up to the end, but my main problem is that I can't see how giving someone your kidney is a bad idea, so the first sentence doesn't seem to belong. I know the character doesn't want to do it, but she doesn't actually argue that giving him her kidney is a bad thing - she knows it's necessary to give him one, she's just scared to. But of course that's just my opinion :o)

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