Thanks, Damien and Nick! The style is simpler than other stuff I write because it suits the story. It actually seemed to write itself - I only had an image in my mind of the exile returning to town dragging a coffin and had no idea how it was going to continue - I thought it was going to be bleak and bloody, but I guess I just wasn't in the mood for that after Saving Lorelei! I'm just happy that it's short!
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