Re: Re: Standoff

Damien | 13/11/2011

I think I could have probably made things a little clearer and have everything make a little more sense, but I deliberately went for ambiguity because when I read I want to be drawn in and have to use my imagination to try and work out whats going on or to fill in the colour of a scene, and so I tried to do the same thing here :-)

It may not have worked as well as I'd have liked, but at least the two people that I know for sure read it were left having to think about it afterwards, and that can only be a good thing!

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