Re: Standoff

Sonya Lano | 07/11/2011

Anyone who writes a story without the letter e deserves to be congratulated so of course hats off to you, sir, for writing the story at all! My only suggestion is that maybe you add information that you were responsible for bringing the vodka to the Christmas party because it wasn't clear to me (though of course we know that I miss twists often in stories :o).

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